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Beautiful

Author: Sanzo
Title: Beautiful
Characters/Pairing: Yunjae, Yoochun, Junsu & Changmin
Rating: NC 17
Form: One-shot / Short Story (4/4)
Beta: Not beta-ed. Please forgive errors
Genre: Fluff and hints of smut
Excerpt: Seemed like all the times Junsu thought Jaejoong was alone during the separation, he actually never was.

Ghost (1/4), Salty Taste of Tears (2/4), Chained Souls (3/4)


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haru_ran
Nov. 5th, 2015 08:29 am (UTC)
This was really a beautiful read. Thanks for this nice story. :)♥
eenmjejeyun
Nov. 5th, 2015 11:09 am (UTC)
i'm crying.
You're great miss-sanzo nee-san! thank you for this wonderful story.^^
aizamiaboojj
Nov. 5th, 2015 11:49 am (UTC)
finally ending!!!omg!!...am so happy that you are updating and the couple is unstoppable...xDDD....everyday i will at least once open up your page to see whether you update or not...all of your stories are addicting...hahaha..the way you write is just so amazing..:)
please write more..and thank you for all the masterpiece..^O^
sanzo-chan fighting!!....:D
pinkydeshou
Nov. 5th, 2015 06:37 pm (UTC)
What a beautiful fic♡♡♡
arekooneyjm_yj
Nov. 6th, 2015 02:17 am (UTC)

Beautiful indeed..thank you miss sanzo 😘😘

jaan30
Nov. 6th, 2015 02:32 am (UTC)
Awwww, this is so so SWEET! And believable too lol yunjae probably would be all over each other and lovey dovey^^ and yoosumin are so funny xD I'm with them lol I'd want to see it too! Yunjae's love is unlike anything I've ever seen<3 thank you so much for writing this, I absolutely love it<333
noeldenever
Nov. 7th, 2015 03:28 pm (UTC)
Helloooo Sanzo Unnie, thank you for the toothache you've given me by writing this! So glad when I got a notification that you updated your journal a few days ago. Haven't read any YJ fic for a year, but I will always return to this fandom for you. You still have your magic, never fails to get me spellbound with your fic. It's like going into a warm relaxing bath after a stressful day, so soothing and peaceful for the soul.

I love it, and I love you *sends tight hugs your way*
saramas
Nov. 7th, 2015 08:34 pm (UTC)
Wowwwwwwwww, Just Wow!
That was amazingly beautiful. All along the story, I was just fascinated how beautiful their love was. Your writing style is so smooth that it felt like I was there during all those scenes, where Jaejoong dreamed Yunho's presence, where he saw him for the fist time after 2 year and a half, where he woke up and thought yunho has left him again, and definitely where Yoochun, Junso and Changmin were watching them. And you know what, the last part where you pictured their relationship from their dunsangs point of view was just amazing!
I'm already waiting for your next story!
Fighting!!
believeinred
Nov. 8th, 2015 03:24 am (UTC)
"You guys are fishy," Jaejoong narrowed his eyes, directing them at Changmin as if he questioned, 'what did you tell them?'. Changmin shrugged, acting innocent.

^why is this so familiar? This line. Hmmm. I think you posted some excerpts before right? Hehe. And ohhhh. I think you've got more to post. Hahaha

Gaahhh. I like your oneshot series. As always, it's so lovely. Awwwww <3 the characters, their involvement, the plot. Everything. It feels like heartless and heartfelt once again. Hahaha. Thank you for sharing this with us :D /send yunjae cookies/

PS. I love Junsu throughout the story. Such a baby.
jaeismine
Nov. 8th, 2015 10:25 am (UTC)
Awww this is sweettt... they are lucky to be able seeing these things
juniyunjae
Nov. 8th, 2015 10:34 am (UTC)
I cry. This is very beautiful, I could not put it in words. onky hope for the best for uri yunjae, i love them so so much ;; yoosumin too.
kiboushinjitsu
Nov. 17th, 2015 04:31 am (UTC)
Man, what I would do to be a part of YunJae world. Armed with tissues and a glass cup.
hana_kiree
Nov. 23rd, 2015 11:35 pm (UTC)
Aaaahhhhhh...happy happy happilyyyy ever after ending from the best YunJae writer in the universe... Saranghae unnie.. Don't ever stop...pleaseee~~~

*Jaejoong's puppy eyes +Junsu's dolphinnie voices*
tina_yunho
Nov. 27th, 2015 12:50 pm (UTC)
nice.. sweet sweet YunJae! will wait for your another 'YunJae hard over heel in love with each other' story in the future! please keep writing :)
ekinz31
Dec. 9th, 2015 09:15 pm (UTC)
OMG, yeahhhh.... Part 4. Thank you.. thank you... i can not stop read your story. Honestly i have read these whole set of story again and again. i do not know how many again that I can say. Thank you for the beautiful story. It seems so real to me :D
vanilaz_w
Jan. 3rd, 2016 03:36 pm (UTC)
Finally I have time for this beautiful ending.

Thank you again, dear author, for writing this lovely story. I have always loved how you describe YunJae's love, not only in this story but in every of yours. It is beautiful indeed. It warms my soul.

Lastly, happy new year. I wish you have a great year ahead. Also, I'll be looking forward to you next fiction. ^^
vanilaz_w
Jan. 3rd, 2016 03:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you, dear author, for writing this beautiful story.

I have always loved the way that you describe YunJae's love, not only in this story but in every one of yours. They warm my heart indeed.

Lastly, happy new year to you. I wish you a great year ahead. I'll be waiting for your next fiction. :)
miss_sanzo
Jan. 9th, 2016 07:46 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, dear reader, for reading!

Happy New Year to you too. Hoping this year would be better than your last.
/hugs/
imtiris
Jan. 12th, 2016 02:42 am (UTC)
Dear Sanzo
This is the first time I come here, this account was created to read your stories and comment to you only. Really want to say: "I know you by heart".

Thanks for your updating, it made my day, dear.
miss_sanzo
Jan. 13th, 2016 10:08 am (UTC)
Re: Dear Sanzo
thank you so much for reading. I am overwhelmed to know you created the account to read my stories. /hugs/
MECHE25
Jan. 18th, 2016 02:58 pm (UTC)
Love you!
I should say I haven't checked on your webpage in a long time. And when I did I found this wonderful story... I have to say I always loved your writing. So fresh, so alive... You totally captivate me... let's wait for more Yunjae... my lovely Yunjae
miss_sanzo
Jan. 26th, 2016 02:51 pm (UTC)
aww
thank you! /hugs/
standbymy5gods
Feb. 3rd, 2016 03:10 pm (UTC)
i loved this
i miss yoosumin a lot more now

thanks for writing and sharing this, unnie!
looking forward to your next fics :)
cassietvfxq01
Mar. 4th, 2016 08:39 pm (UTC)
I was having a hard time at the university, overworking myself like crazy and I felt so frustrated but after reading your fanfic all the fluff made me powered up :D Loved this fic so much!!! You're an awesome writer.
miss_sanzo
Mar. 8th, 2016 09:50 am (UTC)
All the best with university dear! You'll make it through, remember: breathe, one step at a time /hugs/
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